วันเสาร์ที่ 18 มกราคม พ.ศ. 2557

My bad /good impression on the end of 2013 year and the New year 2014


In 2013,there are bad things and good things in my life.I stated to tell about good things in the new year. Before,I come back home at Kanchanaburi. I bought a cake to surprise my sister and bought a souvenirs to give my grandmother.My mother came to receive me.We traveled at Thakanun Temple.She bought a bag for me.I felt glad my sister come back home because I didn't meet her.My mother made to surprise by sing birthday song and had a gift it was ring.I bought a shirt to her. My family knew that we come back home.We bought octopus,pork,hot dog,and fish to cook Jim Jum. Although we didn't travel in the new year.We felt happy to stay together.My sister and I rode a bicycle and took a lot of  photo.The weather was very cold.The temperature was 10-13 degree.This morning,my sister and I went to the market to buy scarf,gloves,and sock.After that,we bought vegetables,fruits,and sweet to cook.We help to clean house such as,swept,scrub,and wash dishes.In the evening,my family and I made merit at Thamadua Temple.There was a lot of people.My sister and I help to my aunt sold Papaya salad,Yum Woon Sen,and sausage.We felt fun with selling in the temple.The New Year was I felt happy and enjoyable because I come back home for a long time and stayed with my family.

These are good memory forever of my life.The next was bad things.For me,bad thing was I quarreled with my sister about homework her.I taught her in Math subject.She didn't do it because she was lazy and she played with her friends,so I hit her and she cries.I felt to wrong because I hit her.I felt so sad with action me.This is bad thing for me.


















6 ความคิดเห็น:

  1. after "to" you can used V1 " market to bought"

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  2. " had a gift was ring"
    I think it isn't complete.

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  3. This sentence “she cry.”
    I think, you should edit “she cries.”

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  4. This is good memory forever of my life. = I think you have many stories, you should be use the plural form

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  5. I come back home---should be--I came back home
    My mother came to receive me.----should be---"My mother came to pick me up." better

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