The teacher told that in the test there were 5 titles gave us to choose 2 titles.
I choose 2 title about the Exceptional person and Trends and fads.I practiced to write them and recited to remember them.The teacher gave a picture to describe about detail of the picture.She gave the market picture.I described to travel at the Amphawa floating market with my friend.I describe detail that there were many shops and had a old house to view culture and traditional.I didn't know that I wrote to correct them but I tried to write them from my brain a little bit.This time,the examination made me had to improve more.I will try to improve English skills.
This test makes me excited and serious.
ตอบลบyou should have "st or th" after the date.
ตอบลบThis sentence “gave us to chose 2 titles.”
ตอบลบI think you should edit “gave us to choose 2 titles.”
11 January 2104,today was Children's Day and= you should use article after the word 'was'
ตอบลบ11 January 2104 should be "On January 11th 2014."
ตอบลบI excited----should be ---I'm excited
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